brand new

brand new

A Poem by Jovilious
"

break me

"
I'm only yours until you break me too many times.
till you decide i'm beyond repair 
and replace me with someone brand new

© 2019 Jovilious


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Sad comment on someone with no self confidence...very much a martyr. Good poem, short and meangful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me of an old friend...
Love is hurtful, nothing nice until it is... once again, well done.
-Shoshana

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 17, 2019
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Jovilious
Jovilious

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