Breathe Your Fire

Breathe Your Fire

A Poem by LapseOfMind
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A collection of letters forming words put together in such a structure as to express and evoke emotion.

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It's your fire, that burns deep through me
Voices that peel, this Christmas morning skin
Expose my presence, both here and now
So much anticipation, for me to share my sin
Awake to the tips, of your lips on my breath
Basking in those flames, you radiate never ending
Your smoke my inhalation, that I yearn to breathe
No way I can deny, all this life that you're sending
There's only so many words, yet we're never silent
Alphabets that can't contain, these souls set ablaze

© 2017 LapseOfMind


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you always know how to express your emotions in anything you write..... Kudos my love Kudos

Posted 6 Years Ago


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this is amazing...i absolutely love your humbleness in this write. a very understated but strong romantic piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Well thank you very much, I really appreciate that! Glad that you enjoyed it
You have a way with words my friend, a very strong piece here for sure

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, i appreciate that
I thought the Christmas thing was quite clever.

Posted 7 Years Ago


LapseOfMind

7 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate that

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Added on January 31, 2017
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LapseOfMind
LapseOfMind

Seattle, WA



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