Light becomes me

Dedicated to my husband

In your light, I learn how to love                                In your light, I learn how to love

 

Eyes met, Hearts embrace, Fingers interlace

Hopes, fond distant dreams aroused, forgotten love no longer a memory

Shroud of darkness you uncloak, the wine of your passion you let me taste

Inspiration, you are art, light, sound of music to my soul

 

In your light, I learn how to love                                In your light, I learn how to love

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

A beautifully penned dedication for your hubby~ Very nicely donE!

[Red Witch of Decca Fall..]

This was beautiful. I like how you have the line "In your light, I learn how to love" written around it in a smaller font, it gives it an ethereal feel. It's almost like I can hear it whispered softly in my mind as I read this poem. And the poem itself is written so well, so lovely and romantic.

[Ivory]

Beautiful piece. I love how you was able to convey such emotion in just a few lines.
Very good write.. and thank you for your review ; )

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh my this is really amazing... what a true loving poem for your hubby, I am simply in awe of just how beautiful this is.

[Helena]

Beautiful poem! I loved every last passionate stanza...

"the wine of your passion you let me taste
Inspiration, you are art, light, sound of music to my soul"

Pen on poetess!

Helena :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

What a loving ode to your husband. I like your use of the reference to wine. We must be of similar minds in that our titles are similar and I too have used this reference before. Thank you for sharing your immense talent. Congratulations on a loving relationship.
Light,
Siddartha

[Celtic Cat]

sniff sniff... this is sooo beautiful!!! It really makes my heart feel all tingly!! I'm so happy for you... to find a love like this is pure joy. Absolutely wonderful write, emotionally charged and poignant. LOVE IT!!!!

[BrightEyes]

I loved the repetition of the phrase and how it was a different font style and kind of floating around the piece; what a fantastic write for your love - be sure and show it to him!!!