Rain

Rain

A Poem by LauraH
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this is the second time I've done this cause I accidentally clicked something, also i don't always go on the computer to play. also it's really bad i wrote in like 2 minutes

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I LOVE the rain

It is never a pain

The Rain is so nice at wet

And cool and blue

When it's wet and very grey

I always go on the computer to play

When it's raining it's always a bore

But my dad usually has a snore

In the night the rain soothes me

But in the Morning I'm not happy!

 

 

© 2009 LauraH


Author's Note

LauraH
yah i know its bad

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not that bad...small flaws...but still awesome

Posted 15 Years Ago


it's honest, simple, and unassuming. maybe not a classic, but at least it doesn't pretend to be something it's not.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 28, 2009

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LauraH
LauraH

Sydney, NSW, Australia



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