Sun

Sun

A Poem by LauraH
"

it will rhyme and it wont

"

SUN

The sun is hot and warm

It can still be in the sky during a thunder storm

I prefer the cold to the sun

even though I have so much fun

Sometimes the sun can get very tiring

And I want to fall asleep

And that's what I want to do now!

© 2009 LauraH


Author's Note

LauraH
yah i dont really care

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simple, smiley, and yes, innocent.

Posted 15 Years Ago


innocence flows so well thru the poem....after reading this i feel like i want my childhood back when days were so happy and nights care-free...nice write...

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

Posted 15 Years Ago



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LauraH
LauraH

Sydney, NSW, Australia



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