Infinite Question...

Infinite Question...

A Poem by funeralmoon

the eyes conceal

what we cannot see

the arms struggle

to feel what is free

our minds ponder

on what is lost

our price is paid

but what was the cost

will we end up in chains

for a catch we didnt see

will we flood the earth

and become the sea

are we the answer

to the infinite question

or are we lost

with no destination

will we reach the other side

before its too late

or can i see

the unbecoming fate..

© 2009 funeralmoon


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I loved the whole writing, the rhyming, the contents, beautiful. Great poem, keep up the great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it, it opens up several questions to our minds, and at the same time answers many questions of our mind. It tests what we think and is very accurate, nice one this time. Good job and thanks for sharing this poem with the site and your fans, and keep up the good work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Ohhh... loved this one.. sure makes the mind think! Freedom is something ringing out to my thoughts in this one here.. will we turn our backs while so many changes take place and as a society or country not even glance in the direction of change as it is happening??? Your lines:

will we end up in chains
for a catch we didnt see

Unfortunately in history we swing from the left to the right and back.. we are facing a period where there definitely will be some loss of freedoms (some will be for our protection). It would seem that whether there was a war or not .. there was bound to be some losses. I try to think positively .. that we have been lucky to live on a continent that for years.. we managed to live in democracy with a SENSE of freedom. Freedom is truly a state of mind.. hopefully we don't lose too much of the real thing though! Thank you so much for sharing.. definitely a forewarning most understand but it sure is harder to find the solutions to! =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this one, its kinda foreboding. Very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Love this! I read it twice. I love the way your words just flow. It's short but sweet. :) Great poem!

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We can only erase words, but not our past. I am a minimalist, who loves writing, painting, and nature. I write what I feel because it is a good outlet to channel my emotions through. I feel like.. more..

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