Wandering Visions

a comment and reflecion on KArma and Muscle memory...does that make it dharma?..unknown

Nothing .

Goes exactly as …

…planned.

The hidden scheme of life …

…makes certain.

So once again our…

…Karmic round.

Reminds us of body …

..frailties.

Does this sharp righting…

…teach.

And do we use …

…muscle memory..

Trained and …

...engrained?

The lack of autonomic Memory ...

...practiced.

Speaks to us of minds...

...wandering.?

Does soul/spirit envision ...

...when there is great need

 

 

...

Reviews

[Damien Davison]

Nice piece, I myself have to start doing affirmatives in the mornings and such. Say over 5 times each morning things such as: "I'm proud of how far I've made it.", things like that... I enjoyed the layout and the use of Karma reminding of wrongs to right ourselves in time through practice... time... In times of great need, when survival reigns... Thanks for sharing!

[Art]

nice work my friend, Karmic reflection is an interesting thought yet muscle memory combined with the Soul/Spirit and Karma...might just create us into a more experienced or better human ...no?

[Larry Dyson]

yes....ty Art you are always thinking between the lines.. ty ty

[Art]

must be the way you hide the reflections...nice work

[Distant horizons]

All minds, like muscles have their frailties. I just hope they both don't go at once. Excellently structured piece, with many points to ponder. Thanks.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

lots of pressing questions and a fine structure to this poem

[Tate Morgan]

A little wisdom from a lot of living It is something I try to notice.But my muscles say leave me alone nowadays and they dont act like they use to

[Sami Khalil]

A symphony of wise words dear poet... You have done it masterfully...

[Muse]

lack of autonomic Memory...I blame it on fluoride. ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I have a huge respect Karma...if our memory forgets, she will remind us. I truly believe the soul will learn one way or another...the memory will engrain what Karma teaches us through life. She has a way of doing so, through our frailties, she humbles us.

[gombeggar]

fantastic...a poem after my own likings...of course i really appreciate the punctuations

[Larry Dyson]

Ty Emma!