Holographic

chapter 6 of a colab story...light and darkness

Her brain spun at the warped logic of that thought. With all her resolve Angeal spat

 back…”just cause you told Me your Name doesn’t make us friends, and explain the

‘I saved you part,… again’”. That evil cold stare returned to Axels eyes as he dropped

 the phony friendly smile he had affected to maybe fool her. Was he influencing her

 understanding by his unorthodox appearance , by stepping forth from the painting?

Or was she wise to his tricks and know that he was just a hologram, a projection of

 his real self.

Angeal wished she were back in her bed and closing her eyes tightly used her own

 magic words to see if she might be dreaming. ~!#@$! She said and waited a minute,

 then two..now three ..nope she was really here and really had to deal with this Axel

guy…yes he was handsome and cute to the max, but he also had that sneaky snake oil

kinda feel about the rest of him. Giving in to the need to move past either him or

this situation …she repeated her question again and waited.

He was showing just the slightest amount of irritation ,or was it agitation with her

Boldness, slowly repeating her question out loud.That kind of stall always provoked

 Angeal ,and when he replied…”you know what I mean”…she had enough and opened

her mouth and let him have it verbally….

 

 

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

even the rocks will cry out. Evil comes in so many forms. Found the mechanism of a hologram intriguing. There is an appropriate level of "sinister" in Axel. Snakey is a great adjective for him. I am curious about these two - I want to know more....

[Krystal Nicole]

very nice!!! great job

[InsanityWriter]

Nice! :) Keep writing!! ^_^

[♪Barklight♪]

Pretty dang awsome!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

The chopped up formatting makes for broken flow, of thought for the reader. Interesting storyline though.

[Larry Dyson]

thanx we can thank WC for that...

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Yeah I know! When I edit in their text box, it still changes other parts. I usually go through the entire text or it messes up.

[Ruth]

I could visualise this so well :) Loved it, the vanquishing and sweetness...light and triumph, detail beautifully woven, fabulous imagery...much enjoyed dear heart xoxo