Two Bearded Dragons

Two Bearded Dragons

A Poem by Larry Dyson
"

description of my pets behaviour

"

Two Bearded Dragons Have I

 

slightly one in measure

 

crickets eat they

 

live and insect legs rubbing

 

turn heads and eye focus

 

movement triggers

 

lizard fast crawl and pounce

 

-sustained.

© 2010 Larry Dyson


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Beardies are so much fun!

I normally do not care for poetry that is disjointed words on the page. In your hands though, the backwards and sideways telling of the story's image is pitch perfect and masterful. I get a sense of what it is like to actually be a bearded dragon, and that, my friend, is not easy to write. Kudos to you- this is quite lovely and well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I love the way this poem is crafted. I get the sense of snatches of cognizance as each dragon notices and then pounces on its prey. Very simple and a fun read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beardies are so much fun!

I normally do not care for poetry that is disjointed words on the page. In your hands though, the backwards and sideways telling of the story's image is pitch perfect and masterful. I get a sense of what it is like to actually be a bearded dragon, and that, my friend, is not easy to write. Kudos to you- this is quite lovely and well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

We adopted two beardies a few years back "Dino and Sprocket" - they both passed away due to old age but they were fascinating critters to watch. This poem reminded me so much of them.
Great write

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Added on December 31, 2010
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Tags: nature, observation
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Larry Dyson
Larry Dyson

Tomball /Magnolia, TX



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WARNING!!--- my writing approaches Mature most of the time, read with caution if you are concerned ,or so WC thinks? - I'm a retired southern woods walker..who writes and lives modestly..I love n.. more..

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