Memories Key

write for a group using japanese doll and passageway and key

you held the key to my heart ....

 

my little japanese doll...

 

the key is for the door to your safekeeping...

 

in the passageways of my ....

 

memory

Reviews

[blakjassy]

Short and sweet. well balanced, well packaged. Very cute and sweet and affectionate!

[Hamkar]

It is really cute! It definitely does not need to have anything added or taken away! It is short but it only adds to the effect when you have finished reading it. Interesting how the character is a doll not a person, as when I made the contest I imagined alive people not a doll. This doesn't mean anything though, doesn't make it any worse.

[?]

oooh now this I like.
The heart is full of wonderful memories.
Short but packed.
Awesome

[An owl on the moon]

This is so rich in reflections.. those haunting ghosts of memory that breathe over us in the day.. The words just quiet the heart.

[Jaded Mermaid]

It's a neat concept. You opened the pathway for it, that's for sure. I guess it's the whole "key heart" thing that has me liking it.

[SilentVerses]

Simple yet elegant a profound justice to chosen words, little lines that glisten in the shimmering detail of graceful devotion.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

THIS is an embrace~ each word a perfectly placed gem in the setting of adoration~

[Sunni Davis]

Very well crafted and so creative. I have a friend who collects dolls and I know she'd love this poem too.