Morning

Morning

A Poem by Andrew S. Loveland

 

 

When next you go there

  carry me too, my love;

To the place where we lay

  pregnant; with anticipation

of the gathering morn.

 

 

Where duplicity lies furthest

       from our minds; and

  words left unspoken say more

rest here with me a while

  'til the watery dawn

dripping

 

            gold...

 

 from above

 

     ...calls us back home

 

© 2008 Andrew S. Loveland


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beautiful piece, emotional great job Andrew

Posted 6 Years Ago


I'm in complete awe.
the syntax-the way that this is formatted leaves me moving-tagging along with it -like a pasionate dance sworn to stay in bed.

And the morning is such a splendid time for poetry like this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Simple, concise, touching, not at all cliche. Wonderful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OHH MY GOD..I JUST FEEL IN LOVE WITH YOU.lol..soooooooo lovely thats just all I can say about it LOVELY...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Kimmmy///// stunning!!! x0x00x0x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simply beautiful and romantic.
Stunning write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. 'and words left unspoken say more..' So true. Very nice.
And I love how you ended it with the dripping of the dawn. I never thought of it that way before. Such a beautiful image.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Well-written. Sweet. Romantic. Calming.

Nice work! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"To the place where we lay
pregnant; with anticipation
of the gathering morn..."

How extraordinary a line this is! Breathless, indeed!


My best,
kelly



Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely! Striking and romantic - thank you for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Andrew S. Loveland
Andrew S. Loveland

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Andrew S. Loveland (15 Apr 1975) was born in Aberdeen, Scotland but raised in the village of Lhanbryde, in the heart of Speyside. Andrew currently resides in Dublin, Ireland where he balances working .. more..

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