Heart shaped box

Heart shaped box

A Poem by Pretty_as_a_Poet
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a Senryu

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I've been locked inside,
your heart shaped box for a while,
Why let me go now?

© 2013 Pretty_as_a_Poet


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Tiny but mighty.....good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Okay, that was pretty neat, despite the shortness of it. It has quite a bit of feeling for something so small.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Some things are not meant to be more than a moment. This remind's me of the song with the same title by Amy Lee and Nirvana. It's a beautiful song. As beautiful as the thought you're trying to convey here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pretty_as_a_Poet

7 Years Ago

Why thank you! "heart shaped box" by Nirvana was my muse for this piece, as I've heard the song a mi.. read more
Mary Ann M.

7 Years Ago

It's my all time favorite:) You're very welcome.

In the last line, do you mean "now" or "know"? I think "now" fits better, but that's me... I like how emotionless this is. I take it as someone just getting out of a long-term relationship, and wondering what happened, why were they dumped? but instead of being angry or upset like most such poems i read, this is more logical, just a simple inquiry. brilliant dear.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pretty_as_a_Poet

7 Years Ago

oops...typo! lol
Lina Grey

7 Years Ago

:)
as you would say...Brilliant

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nirvana Inspired poetry? perhaps.....
Very nice!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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