Am I Alone?

Am I Alone?

A Poem by Pretty_as_a_Poet

I just started typing one day and what came out of me suprised me.


It is possible, but It sounds crazy,

A girl like me who’s never known love,

Loneliness, everything’s hazy

Someone’s tormenting me from above

I shouldn’t have that dreaded feeling but I do,

I’m miles away when I’m standing next to friends,

Never had someone I truly knew,

The feeling never Ends

 I feel as though there is no one there,

but I shouldn’t feel this way,

Because I have friends that really care,

And they tell me every day,

But why then does my heart bleed?

I’m Independent, I have my wit,

But for something I don’t need,

It’s funny how much that I crave it,

Perhaps I need more than just friends,

Maybe I do need a special someone too,

Maybe my loneliness will end,

When someone whispers “I love you”    

© 2013 Pretty_as_a_Poet

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This is good one..keep it up

Posted 5 Years Ago

I know how this feels!!! Such an incredible longing for that person who you will have a mutual and deep care with. Keep on. Well find them one day. Astounding work.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Amazing!! Loved it!! Keep up the amazing artristry!!

Posted 7 Years Ago

intersting questions posed in here...more of a introspection stuff perhaps...enjoyed

Posted 7 Years Ago

Brilliant poem, you will find love someday, you're too wonderful not to :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Woah.....what a fantastic poem! Psh, a rambling? More like a masterpiece! X)
I like the fast pace and certain capitalization of words- cool idea! Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago

wow really like this well done indeed

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on April 2, 2013
Last Updated on April 2, 2013



Langley, B.C, Canada

About Website!! Hey I'm Pretty_as_a_poet, but you can call me Emily. I'm a poet, poetry is my passion and possibly the reason why I have been put on this earth.... more..


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