Ever Wondered

Ever Wondered

A Poem by "Fanatical Dreamer"

She'll sit in an office rocking from side to side,

whenever she gets an irritable feeling inside.

 

                Figures would make her mind turn cold,            

Whereas an essay would add food to her soul.

 

Some may use the word naive to describe her,

As she willfully acts in a childish behavior.


Yet still laughs and screams may not always be heard,

As she sometimes elegantly utters extravagant words.

 

A house full of people won't always excite her,

As her spouse is all she may need to entice her.

 

Her imagination is beyond her control,

She’ll fantasize about stories yet to unfold.

 

She's as sensitive as a moth to the light,

She can easily tell when something isn't right.

 

Classical music makes her quiver,

A Dramatic movie would her mind trigger.

 

She's creative

She's persuasive

She's a weirdo

She doesn't care though

Is it because she's a woman of the Arts?












    

                           

    

© 2014 "Fanatical Dreamer"


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"Her imagination is beyond her control,
She’ll fantasize about stories yet to unfold.

She's as sensitive as a moth to the light,
She can easily tell when something isn't right."

All these symptoms tell of an artist. A poem that triggers the imagination...:)......

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
 "Fanatical Dreamer"

9 Years Ago

Thanks Sami for your time and constructive words...always appreciated! :-)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

:).......................
a lot of creative people are strange creatures and should be
that's why they are creative not just the average office worker I guess

Posted 9 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and commenting
 wordman

9 Years Ago

you are welcome
I like this because people often feel that artistic people are strange and a lot of us probably are but in a good way. One just has to be willing to get to know us...actually we are some of the more sane :). I really enjoyed this and the image is off the chain.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

9 Years Ago

Thank you I'm glad you like it :-)
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BL
This would seem to speak for many, I love the honesty of your portrayal of strengths and weaknesses and personal idiosyncrasies. Youre either very observant or its about your good self! (Guess)

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

It's totally me,thanks for the review
BL

10 Years Ago

Its a lovely piece and I like the use of colour.
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Damn! I'm quite sure this piece speaks about you,you've got a wonderful mind and personality F.D.

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Wow! your words, I'm a bit flattered by it. Thank you!
Am damn sure .. in this poem you've characterized your own character ... but neh... you ain't a weirdo but a pretty coolio .. well, let's come to the point, i loved your this beautiful poem, you've lost me into the heaven of words that're well colored .. nice poem. Wonderful artistry. Keep on, Fana... i enjoyed the piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Thank you Neon for reading and commenting,I'm glad you liked it
Love this!
Quirky and sassy. Fun, flirty, and a little aloof...
I'm not sure the explanation is complete, but I think it is a major factor in who you are.

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Thanks Scotty, I'm glad you liked it
This is a very telling poem about the nature of artful women: It inspired me to write this tiny gift poem for you which you may keep as your own:

Women Arts

She’s a woman of the Arts
delving in weird verbal smarts
changing lives by changing hearts
on this course that her map charts.

Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Awww thank you too tweet! ^_^
Aethereal

10 Years Ago

You're welcome!
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K.
lovely. This one of those writes that every female feels they can relate to.
'A house full of people won't always excite her,
As her spouse is all she may need to entice her.
Her imagination is beyond her control,
She’ll fantasize about stories yet to unfold' These are the best stanzas without a doubt.
nicely done.


Posted 10 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

10 Years Ago

Thank you!

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