Wonders Of Opening Doors

Wonders Of Opening Doors

A Poem by Leesah

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This morning

Has no sunshine

yet

 

Curtains still

Not pulled away,

and

 

Wonders of

Opening doors

 

Gather at knobs

Waiting to be

Turned…

 

 

© 2008 Leesah


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There is so much to be discovered in the calmness of today...not yet begun. I love the pictures you paint in this. The whole piece is terrific!
~Lorraiyne

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is pure delight! It's almost haiku-like in its delivery, but especially in its concentrated focus on possibility. All your poetry has a unique and lovely voice, and it's epitomized here in the freshness of being aware of so much around you. Beautiful! This is going in my favorites!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonders of Opening doors...

You capture a lot in a very small phrase. At that moment, before the door opens, all possibilities exist, and then... well next time Monty Hall, always next time.


Posted 16 Years Ago


Short, sweet and filled with wonderment.
This is beautifully written Leesah.
Keep up the good work

Posted 16 Years Ago


You have a delightful way of writing ....

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really cool....to me it's a poem about hope and optimism.....very nice!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I "really" like this. Consise, but with the whole realm of possibilities. You are a writer. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

a lovely breath of fresh air. pure and up-lifting.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 20, 2008

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Leesah
Leesah

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