Waiting (Life Isn't Fair)

Alone,

I'm waiting for you,

For your voice,

For your face,

For something that tells me

You're still there.

 

Together,

We're wating for ourselves.

For our thoughts

For our dreams

For something thats tells us

We still care.

 

Alone,

You're waiting for me.

For my presence

For my love

For something that tells you

Life is fair.

Reviews

[..R.I.P..]

I love this poem!!
So simple, and yet everyone can relate to it. This is definately going in my favorites!
Great write!

Thanks for sharing.
xoxo
~JaniK

[Glenna.]

I agree with Eagle Cruagh, this poem was VERY sweet and well put.
I liked how you started and ended with "Alone" verses. It was nice to read and easy to understand.
Yet it still keeps me thinking...

NIIIIIICE. :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is a sweet and simple
poem. One that will be appreciated
by many for its purity of form.

I love it and hope to see many more
from this writer.

Rate: 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh