Gentle

Gentle

A Poem by Lex
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A little ditty about a perfect day

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Ray of light

Glistening through the leaves

 

Leaves me feeling a sense

Of wonder

 

Wondering what I'll do

On a day so beautiful

 

Swim in the lake

Walk in the parks

Lay in your arms

Stare at the stars

Get lost in a dream

Go fishing in yonder stream

 

All of it with you

My one

My love

My only you

© 2008 Lex


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This is so beautiful...I loved how you ended one line with a word and then started the new line with that word...very cool...this was a sweet thing to read, thank you! :)



PS- Don't know what's up with the ratings...I hit 100 and it came out much less, so I deleted my review and re-did it...sorry :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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This is a beautiful, uncomplicated poem of love and wonderment. It left me with a happy feeling. I needed to read something like this. Rain..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love makes everything so much better. Our eyes open and we can see things we never noticed. Even housework gets better! Your poem really is "Gentle" and brings to mind carefree days and beauty. Your use of nature and love make this such a special poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very simple and pretty and innocent, nice work. By the way, thanks for your review.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful perfect day out enjoying the wonders of nature with the one you love. Definately a day to remember. Great romantic write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Full of innocence, wonder, and love. Beautiful write Lex. Thank you for the read request. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How utterly innocent and sweet this is!

Wonderful job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful...I loved how you ended one line with a word and then started the new line with that word...very cool...this was a sweet thing to read, thank you! :)



PS- Don't know what's up with the ratings...I hit 100 and it came out much less, so I deleted my review and re-did it...sorry :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely, does sound like a perfect day. Grab it and do all of the above! Enjoyed the feeling of peace in this poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 9, 2008

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Lex
Lex

Glasgow, Scotland



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