Are we here?

What would we do if we found out that God didn't exist?

I've just found out

That there is no God

 

It's kinda depressing

I feel alone all of a sudden

Kind of empty, you know?

 

I don't like it

 

I've decided to invent him

God, I mean

 

Ah ...

 

I feel better already

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[None]

This really makes us appreciate God, the one we can take for granted so often. You shocked me and you found me hopeful and then relieved! Your form and colors are perfect. Great write!

[Claudia MelGregory]

Oh yeah, I like this, and having been there as well, understand the de-constructing and re-inventing of God again and again. lol. It's brief, concise and yet what is written says so much.

Claudia

[R J Askew]

Maybe god was lonely and so invented us to keep him company. Wouldn't we do that if we were god-like creatures on our own in some remote universe? Actually I'd create a more reverential creature than us as we now are. Or maybe if we try and be mates with god we will discover a whole new side to him or her. And yes I'm here and you're there. But I'm there to your here. Great thought producing poem.

[Jenny Davis]

LOL! This is very interesting because many folks say that God and the Bible were invented by man to control the people...while I won't argue that theory...I still much rather believe in Him...it does take the fear of death away, ya know? Call me kooky, but I enjoyed this thought very much :)

[Ken Simm.]

I can't think of a useful God just now. But the writing is excellent.

[Nicholas Hallows]

I like this because it made me think about what you were saying. Was god invented by man in the first place to fill a void - I think so anyway. Without god in my life, well, it would be exactly the same. But then i have had positive influences in my life by people who do you have faith in god, so does that mean god has touched me? Or just their goodness? Hmm. Very thought provoking, as the question of religion probably always will be. Well written. NH

[poddar kushal]

this is in a way human history. we lost and found god...we build and rebuild god..only to lose his concept in meaningless and lustful worships ...and again we invent them in us.a writing that should provide us something to ponder over.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

An interesting write. I thought they did find out God existed or something and there was this whole thing abou Easter being cancelled. Shows how much i pay attention....anyways, great write!

Rayne