Beforehand

Beforehand

A Poem by Libby Carsons

You gave me the sun through the palm of your hands,
And I thought, how wonderful this power is,
Until you pulled away with such wind-blown speed,
As if suddenly ashamed to have chosen me.

And ever since then, my hands have been cold,
As cold as the wish of you letting me know,
That in the end, you would eventually leave,
During the middle of Winter, leaving me alone to grieve.

© 2013 Libby Carsons


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this was very heartfelt and defiantly tells a story. Great write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Libby Carsons

8 Years Ago

thanks so much!
i really liked this poem, it flows so beautifully. Well penned

Posted 8 Years Ago


Libby Carsons

8 Years Ago

thank you!
I don't have any constructive feedback for you, since I think this poem is perfect as is. You did a really good job on this one!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Libby Carsons

8 Years Ago

wow thank you so much!!
Wow, great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Libby Carsons

8 Years Ago

thanksss!!
You're totally insane, i don't know how n from where towhere you get idea to write , but from anywhere you got, iloved yout=r insanity, writin' words so simple, but works as a winter..lol..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Libby Carsons

8 Years Ago

wow, thank you so much!
YOUR IMAGINATION IS SIMPLY EXOTIC!
and the way u have used the winter and the sun
it says it all!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Libby Carsons

8 Years Ago

I really appreciate it thank you!
junaid altaf

8 Years Ago

welcome
A really really good poem indeed !!!
Very very nice =D
Impressive !!

"That in the end, you would eventually leave,
During the middle of Winter, leaving me alone to
grieve."


Well done !!!



Posted 8 Years Ago


Libby Carsons

8 Years Ago

thank you very much!
Interesting imaginary, it has a bitter taste to it, of a lost love....great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Libby Carsons

8 Years Ago

thanks I appreciate it!

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Libby Carsons
Libby Carsons

Brooklyn, NY



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I'm a student studying in New York, studying interior design and trying to find the meaning of passion. On what it really means to feel it, to be affected by it. Wondering if writing is my passion. I.. more..

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