reclusive endeavor?

reclusive endeavor?

A Poem by mick weller
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shows great uncertainty

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unpublished
can't write
not trying

all this
and more
i i sprinkle stir
into my coffee

© 2009 mick weller


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mick weller
aye aye

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"but you have a whole briefcase full of stunning words, just dying to get out . "
This.
No wait. Not that.
You shouldn't write just for the sake of writing. It's forced that way, and the audience can tell.
"unpublished
can't write
not trying"
You said it right there. Not trying. And it's obvious.
Please, try.
AND GRAMMAR

Posted 11 Years Ago


This reminds me of some of my rejections. But we must lift our heads and hearts and push out into the windy world of words again. Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how's the briefcase? I imagine there are a dozen gems in there dying for want of air and sun.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i i = aye aye, or hesitation/nervousness/weariness?

it's a sad little ditty, sir - you listen to Emily Burns and get yer arse into gear :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

but you have a whole briefcase full of stunning words, just dying to get out . . .

I wouldn't be surprised to find you have your own pocket muse

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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