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A Poem by lijoabrahamblog (Lijo Abraham)
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Tells us what we are known for and how well we implement things to keep ourselves unchanged.

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Filled with secrets but utters none, is what I am known for
That's why they speak out to me, secrets that none have ever heard before..
I feel proud and happy when they knock at my minds door
Not because I see another coming to speak out, secrets never shared before
But because I have been opted again, for what I am known for

Being calm and silent, is what I am known for
Maybe that's why few leave and go, allowing droplets of feelings to pour..
I feel depressed and its hurting me, whispers my heart core 
Not because these few include the ones whom I vouch for
But because they took advantage, for what I am known for

Full of energy and fun, is what I am known for
And never let them down, when they say Let's party more..
I never feel exhausted waiting until the last one to snore
Though most of the times its me who has drank till the last pour
But I still make sure others enjoy my presence, and that's what I am known for

Being positive & always caring, is what I am known for
Maybe because I always felt, their words I shouldn't ignore..
I make sure my response has the touch of love and care, what they expect more
Not because they are close to me and I have taken up any swore
But because they believe in me, for what I am known for

To love and be true, is what I am known for
And I make sure I stand by them all, may it be celebrations or war..
Even though love comes with conditions, sometimes one or four or more
Trying to give me hints to rethink, all that happened before
But I still make sure I don't change myself, as that's what I am known for

© 2018 lijoabrahamblog (Lijo Abraham)


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lijoabrahamblog (Lijo Abraham)
Still working on basics.. Still learning.. Still implementing.. Will still be trying..

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Great piece! One thing that throws me off is the 'somewhat' caring. Maybe if that word was changed to 'always' or 'forever' it might be nicer.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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lijoabrahamblog (Lijo Abraham)

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment and your suggestion. Even I feel replacing the word would be nicer. :)

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Added on July 26, 2017
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Tags: Love, Fun, secrets, calm, silent, energy, happy, proud, positive, caring, true, advantage, hurt, feelings

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lijoabrahamblog (Lijo Abraham)
lijoabrahamblog (Lijo Abraham)

Dubai, United Arab Emirates



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Hi... I started writing small poems few years back which was just a small way of expressing my feelings by adding rhymes. And today I am here sharing the poems which I had written earlier and also t.. more..

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