The rhyme of life

The rhyme of life

A Poem by likhnewala
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Simplicity that life offers for us to complicate.

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A wonderful gift of life
we are bestowed upon
And it lies within our sight
to make it count on

God does not judge
while making us
So why must we grudge 
and make a fuss?

Giving a life 
is not within our control
But making someone's bright
will make ours more whole

Don't measure the years
for there are other yardsticks
Nor measure the beers
for that makes it just sick

Joy must be first nature
which should spread happiness
For man is a creature
built to know no sadness

Love and be loved
and make that a motto
For then will you be served
a recipe to win life's lotto

A poem might rhyme in words
but its the music of life
Which when fermented like curds
gives the much needed spice.

© 2011 likhnewala


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likhnewala
First attempt people !.. Will appreciate reviews/comments/suggestions !!

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