Lost

Lost

A Poem by Ange Pange
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I'm not really good at writing poems but hopefully it isn't too bad. :]

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Wandering and wandering,

I don't know how long I've been here,

I don't know if anyone is still searching,

A hole in my heart, one single tear.

 

I need to find the light,

I need to break out of the night.

It's getting darker, like I'm closing my eyes,

But I know it's because I've lost my sight.

© 2009 Ange Pange


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That was n ot bad, I really liked it, so small but such big meaning.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short and sincere
I like this, it's wonderful

Posted 11 Years Ago


Not bad at all... you said what may of us still feel... lost and looking for that love to bring light to our hidden hearts.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a few words but says so much.. i really loved it coz it was simple and puts across the point so well.. very crisp! :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

not bad at all! : )
in just a few words
you have wriiten so much meaning
loved it!
-arabella

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice!
An almost-perfect rhyme scheme, too!

^-^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVED IT!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short sweet and to the point, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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