Lost

I'm not really good at writing poems but hopefully it isn't too bad. :]

Wandering and wandering,

I don't know how long I've been here,

I don't know if anyone is still searching,

A hole in my heart, one single tear.

 

I need to find the light,

I need to break out of the night.

It's getting darker, like I'm closing my eyes,

But I know it's because I've lost my sight.

Reviews

[We are young.]

That was n ot bad, I really liked it, so small but such big meaning.

[just is]

Short and sincere
I like this, it's wonderful

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Not bad at all... you said what may of us still feel... lost and looking for that love to bring light to our hidden hearts.

[poetic soul]

a few words but says so much.. i really loved it coz it was simple and puts across the point so well.. very crisp! :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Kiara]

not bad at all! : )
in just a few words
you have wriiten so much meaning
loved it!
-arabella

[Rochelle]

Very nice!
An almost-perfect rhyme scheme, too!

^-^

[dramarama123]

LOVED IT!!

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and to the point, well done.