The End

Yeah... just something I made up along the way. As I said before, I suck at poems.

I yearn to hear the sound of laughter,

I yearn to see the smiling faces of family and friends.

I yearn to be able to live life,

But I know this is the end.

 

For me at least...

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

Such a feeling of hopeless struggle, wanting to find more yet at the point of no return... giving up any desire for more... Very vivid...

[Ange Pange]

just 2 let u guys noe, i am not a depressed type of person! i just happen 2 write sad poems bt im not like that. im not a writer, cuz thats not wat i aim 2 b bt i dont mind. i just do it 4 fun bt i like doing otha things so all my depressing poems hav nothing 2 do wid me n its just sumthing from the top of my head, n half the time, i dont noe wat im writing about like i dont noe wat the end is specifically bout. :]

[We are young.]

You dont suck at poems, it just needs some more feeling to it, maybe make it longer, or start out differently, so we can feel what you are trying to make us feel, and what you were

[Arthur Crow]

That's poetry! Flowing with depth of emotion... well scribed.

I only wish it was longer :)

[Wondering Mind]

I don't know why you feel that you're bad at poetry. This reads well and the thoughts/emotions are expressed nicely.