The next man

Your lips I still taste,

your hands I still

memorize,the way 

your posture sits

when tugging me in close,

every tiny detail, has 

been jolted into my 

wits like tiny needles 

injecting the skin of 

the innocence

Everything about you still  

remains, the uncertainty of

our future still lingers in these

post cards I never end up sending,

your name still slips out of my 

lips like we never fell apart, 

the heaviness of this empty 

letter box leaves the air 

feeling so thin and loneliness 

my biggest company

I do not know how long It 

will take me to love another

or how long it will take

for me to look at a man and

not think revulsion, not think

pain, pain you inflected so 

easily, so professionally

These scars you left 

marking my purity, is 

nothing compared to the

single pain engravings 

you left on my tattered 

heart, the tiny spoken 

promises you gave to me 

on a silver platter

Do not apologize to me,

but apologize to the 

next man who tries 

to captivate my heart,

the next man who insists 

his spoken promises are

filled with the truth,

the truth I never witnessed

from you

Do not apologize to me

but apologize to the next

man who is doing it right

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Lovely write, you have done an excellent job with words here.....Very well thought out, i find it very unique and i really love the memories and things you have described here....Again a very clear and honest feeling of heart....Full ratings with clappings.....

[Lilaa]

Thank you so much for reviewing my work! I write from the heart, again thank you for taking time out of the day to review my work! :)

[Inject Positivity]

It my pleasure frnd....

[samparks,sam]

nice poem , every feeling in your poem nice

[TheMalady]

Aw... You have a nice poem, quite the twist at the end. The emotion of a person who just relished freedom and the bitterness of the parting. I guess you can show your poem to people who experienced this kind of affair. This is a great inspiration, a strength for those hearts that were broken. Great poem! :)

[Gaurav]

I read it few times to instill in. When someone loves you and you are still holding on to your past, it is a time of tough decision to make. Either one should move on to accept the next person or just remain in memories of past. Both are beautiful. While one has the beauty of hope, other has beauty of loneliness. Great peace. Keep it up.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was really meaningful, was written straight from your heart has real depth and emotion this piece.
I really enjoyed reading this, and I love the meaning behind this poem.
Keep writing :)

[Lilaa]

Thank you so much for your feedback! Means so much to me! :'D

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome anytime :)

[Nizar]

i really really really love it , no , adore it , no im fond of it ! this style , these ideas , all the poem all of it , piece of art , totally different from my writing style i like the way you write . you litterally write from your honest heart :) i've always wondered if i had a friend who i could discuss ith so many stuff about writing poems ^^ i hope we'll talk about it one day , keep it up , again i love it

[Lilaa]

Wow! That is truly amazing to hear :'D, I'm so glad you connect with my writing and I would love to talk! Thank you so much, these feedbacks inspire me to write! Thank you so much again! :D