If being

If being

A Poem by Lilaa

If being submissive sends 
pleasure down my mans spine,
I will be submissive for my man,

If being on my knees drives the
inner monsters hiding behind the 
shadows of innocents my man 
reflects, I will be on my knees for 
my man

If it pleases him to converge my 
body, I will offer him my sides,
my arms, my beauty that only he
would set eyes on

If pleasure initiates out of my 
mans insides, I will continue 
to pleasure my soul mate, I 
will continue to be amenable
to my lover

If he wants to touch, my 
man will touch, touching
my ribs, my stomach, feeling
my excitement wonder up
in his arms, he will touch, 
he will touch  the way the 
sun kisses our skin, the 
way our tongues touch
our teeth, the way the 
moon touches our eyes 

If my man wants to 
teach me, I will let him
teach me, because my man
taught me that true 
love has a face on this 
earth, my baby taught me
that strawberry milkshakes
taste so much better in the 
winter, my lover taught 
me that sex doesn't only 
have to be in the bedroom,
it can be at our favorite 
restaurant, in our car 
or even in the basement.

If being in love with a 
dominate man means
being submissive, I will 
be submissive for my 

© 2016 Lilaa

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What to think about this, I see how you would do anything for your man and if sacrificing everything is needed then you would do it, but what of him? Is the extra mile stretched or just falls short to his feet? I like the poem it just makes me wonder, the woman here deserves a man of equal share. Good poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


7 Years Ago

There is equal share, I just said it in my point of view. He'd do the same no doubt.
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Very beautiful. A message to other girls out there. You are truly a role model to other women of what a true lover is. I can relate to this: my girlfriend and I have been long distance for about a year now. To this day, she will do anything to see me happy. Simply because she wants her lover to be happy with her. You remind me of my girlfriend; such amazing people.

Posted 7 Years Ago

You ARE a "Master's miss..." and your poem is well worthy and understood.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Strong message to the society.....A different concept, unique imagery with very good presentation....Well thought out too....Loved the ending most.....Full ratings!!!!

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Added on February 14, 2016
Last Updated on February 14, 2016



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