Fresh Cookies At Noon

fresh nuts

swishy butter

blendy

 

spooning batter

happy, fatter

crumble melty

chip

 

crumb

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lynx]

I'm hungry, lolz.

I didn't really get much point off this poem, but it was fun.

[Kevin Vorshak]

I can smell them cooking now! Thanks for sharing.

[Shellie]

This is great, it draws a smile at the simplicity but the power of words to dscribe something so simple like cookies. The 1st thought that struck me was if you expanded the first verse it'd be a great haiku, also keeping this version. Just a thought.

[Keto Fett]

I am also a fan of cookies, who isn't? Nice write, keep it up! :)