Cake

Cake

A Poem by SpiceCookie
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What does cake taste like to you?

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My mouth touches a cloud.
It's sweet, soft,
and covered with a creamy and fluffy substance.
It carries me up into the sky...
I'm flying too high
to want to come down.

© 2016 SpiceCookie


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Now! Who's gonna get me a slice of cake?!
Am fell flat on the image of cake and so on your poem...the cloud like feeling while having cake is out of the world totally...mmmmmmmm!!😋🍰

Posted 5 Years Ago


SpiceCookie

5 Years Ago

Haha thank you :D
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5 Years Ago

Wc😊...!!!
Very cute poem! I love the picture of the slice of cake, looks delicious!

Posted 5 Years Ago


SpiceCookie

5 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
I really want cake now... Eating cake really is like eating a cloud. Thank for the sweet poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


SpiceCookie

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the nice review! :)
So fluffy! :) This is so short and sweet!

Posted 8 Years Ago


SpiceCookie

8 Years Ago

thanks! :)
Flying high on the wings of a sugar rush, nice poem and very relatable as we have all been there :~)

Posted 8 Years Ago


SpiceCookie

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
you described it exactly like what I feel when eating cake . :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


SpiceCookie

8 Years Ago

Thanks! :)

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Added on June 4, 2015
Last Updated on July 13, 2016

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SpiceCookie
SpiceCookie

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Hi! My name is Felicity. I'm 13 years old and I love to read and write! I like to write poetry and fiction stories and books. I hope you enjoy my writing! Quotes: - "I fill my bucket with love. A.. more..

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