It's Never To Late

In that moment i knew
Every passing minute
Every thought that lingered in my mind
Would never be forgotten

Even in the last moment of your life
You gave me everything
In every touch
In every tear
Your love caressed my anguish struck heart
As if to offer comfort

As i listen to the beat of your heart
That got weaker with each passing second
I took your blood soaked body into the cradle Of my arms

You were myn once
You were the light that made my world shine
Your laugh was my favorite song

Your whispered words played
Over and over again in my mind
Like a broken record

Your love is my immortality
Forever i will follow you
Where ever you go
I want you to know

In your thoughts I will listen
In your heart I will beat
Just Think of me
Always Remeber me

Forever my darling
Love me...

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

The loss of a friend is hard to take. This seems as though it isn't a human friend though. Like you came home one day and found your beloved pet struck by a car or crumpled and hurt in a different way. The line: "I took your blood soaked body into the cradle of my arms" Then: "You were myn once". Even though the next stanzas sound as though it is a person..laughing and whispers can come from a pet too. My dog constantly moans and groans along with sighs. He talks too...literally like he is having a convo with me but more garbled. A child looks to their pet as their other half or the besty they love above all others. They have bonds that just don't make sense when you become an adult..but then you don't look at anything the same then. This was another very nice piece..like you just sat down at your desk and let each thought become a stanza and then just let them connect themselves. (could be wrong on the concept here)...but again that's a feeling you bring out through words...they are all exceptional pieces. :)

[Dream Weaver]

No words from me can describe how deeply moving this was.
All I can say that would be of significance is I wish I could have
written this...Well done!

[Eagle Cruagh]

The most revealing words in this poem
are: "Forever my darling, Love me"
You are professing perfect love, "Forever".
That is commitment. You are asking the
deceased to Love you. Love capitalized, meaning
a serious and respected condition. So, this is
you, determined, serious, committed.

I think you thought back to the loss suffered by
a friend and you are projecting how you would
feel under similar circumstances. Above all you
are stating that your feelings are not just a sign
you wear on your arm, but a piece of your heart
that will be part of you forever.

I would seriously like to know the rest of the story.
Very well written, short and extremely meaningful.
Great writing by a talented writer.
----- John

[Marie]

This is a sad, yet beautiful way to say good by. I especially liked the line"Your laugh was my favorite song." great imagery.

[Humor Me]

the way u portrayed your emotions, it's amazing the writing holds an originality and it expresses a lot about you :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not a bad piece at all. You are talented too.

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

nice , thanks for sharing, connected with me :)

[Revery]

This is very intense and powerful. The reader doesn't know the story behind this but in telling a perspective and your feeling you tell enough of it. Strong.

[Antonio Valentino]

soo sweet and tender.. i related well with it from the recent passing of my brother.. thank you for this..

xo

[Otsana]

Although this is a sad poem it's also very emotional and beautiful...your feelings are very genuine and it comes through in every single word. Remember that it is better to have loved and lost than to not have loved at all. Great job!