Moving Words

Moving Words

A Poem by De'Anna
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a little poem i came up with while writing some of my fanfictions.

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Every time I open a note book, or open up a Word Document,
My mind starts to turn the gears.
I start to see things come to life as my fingers type viciously
Or my hand moves across the papers.
Things start to move and have motion as I continue.
The joys of writing can only be experienced by writers, who can imagine
A sheet of paper turning into little clips of life; moving and flowing.
Life can come in many forms; this is just one of them.
Every time I open a notebook, I see a novel unfolding before my eyes.

© 2009 De'Anna


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I like your message here, about inspiration and such. I just found the lines to be a bit of a cliche. I think that you should incorporate more detail to make it seem more like you, as the writer.
I think this is the one line that does that well: "A sheet of paper turning into little clips of life; moving and flowing"
And I love the last line; excellent way of ending the poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Very inspirational, a total pleasure to read your poetry.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like your message here, about inspiration and such. I just found the lines to be a bit of a cliche. I think that you should incorporate more detail to make it seem more like you, as the writer.
I think this is the one line that does that well: "A sheet of paper turning into little clips of life; moving and flowing"
And I love the last line; excellent way of ending the poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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De'Anna
De'Anna

Hopless Valley, RI



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Hey, My name is De'Anna. You can just call me De, or Kyla. Kyla is my name i use often in my stories and around the internet. I'm 16 and living in Rhode Island. I'm a junior at Chariho High School and.. more..

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