Old World

This is a poem I wrote a couple of months ago... My favorite line is 'As she was so many dragon ages ago'. Please tell what your favorite line is.

The sweet smell

Of creamy white blossoms

And the fiery skies

Are shining

With the glory

Of newborn Earth

As she was

So many dragon ages ago

When love was new

And golden doves

Whispered peace

In man’s ear

But now,

It is over,

And the shadows

Are deep and uncertain,

The sky

Is a black torch

Of dark dark anger

And the old ways

Are gone forever

Author's Note

Does this make any sense? It made sense to me but that's because I wrote it. Please comment.