When I Fall Apart, I Think Of You

When I Fall Apart, I Think Of You

A Poem by amelia.elaine
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so its a little cliche. what can i say? i'm a teenage girl. =]]

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you don't have to promise
to catch me when i fall
you don't have to promise me
you'll always be here at my side
my life is a fairytale, that falls apart
at the index
the princess got my prince
i'm the ugly step sister
i put on a smile, wiether it be fake or not
i'm not ready to let you know i'm vulnerable
and that you still make me weak at the knees
i don't melt, i burst into flames when it comes to you
my blood starts to boil
my heart turns warm
it begins to race
then your lips touch hers
my life falls apart all over again every day
my only escape is the weekend
even then i know
i'm not yours and i can't be
my heart freezes over every night
only to be melted by you
and broken all at once
my pulse slows, back to normal pace
i hate myself because i became someone
i wanted you to love
one day i'll find a way
to fall in love
with someone you'll evny
and thats when, my soul and heart
will reunite, and find their way back to you

© 2008 amelia.elaine


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Well we gotta get it out of our system when we're younger.

I dont think anyone older could handle all the hurricanes and hormones battering up our cliche hearts.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is a very cathartic piece, it is very well written. I am impressed by how well it flows. This is a profoundly moving and emotional and was a excellent read. Its brute heart felt honesty is very unique.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Been there, and falling for same person before!!! I think we have all experience what was said in this!!! Great job!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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