cliche lies and the anorixic goldfish

not a true story. don't worry. i've never done any of this. but hell it'd be fun =] [writers block still active]

too short, too soon
the lights flicker
the moon sets behind the wooden fence outside her bedroom window
such a desprate girl, willing to do anything
just to please herself

desires run dead
attraction dies along with the wilting roses
he gave her when they were in love

revenge sets in as the sorrow in her tears fade
so many bruises and wounds left behind
by a boy who changed his mind
about the girl who fell for the cliche lies

the songs he used to play on that broken guitar
they found at a grungie backyard sale last summer
start to skip on the tape he made for her
two valentines back

the goldfish he won at the fair floats to the surface
she hadn't been fed since she found out the tragic news
that he named her goldfish after the girl he was sleeping with on the side

the windows spider and shatter
as she beats his precious VW with the baseball bat
she stole from her neighbors backyard

they'll never find that other girl 
who she burried alive
in his backyard 

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they'll never find that other girl
who she burried alive
in his backyard

this is twisted and i love it!
KUDOSSSS !

[Chuck]

:}

This is amazing.. and twisted.

So, i think its Fantastic! I always love to read poems that are a little out of the ordinary.. Good Job!
-CHuck

[Looouise]

Creepy.Dark.
:]
Very nice.