S*** Like This

S*** Like This

A Poem by limoncello
"

The chorus of a song I'm trying to write -

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"Do you always mismatch your socks?

Does hair always look that way?

Is that how you usually talk?"

I say to them,

Go away, go away

But their words only fill my mind

My emotions are no longer mine

They ask me if I’m always this strange

But I-

I do s**t like this all the time.


© 2018 limoncello


Author's Note

limoncello
The chorus of a song I'm trying to write, but the chords aren't popping up in my head like they usually do, haha. This one will probably take a while.

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This is looking good so far!
One small suggestion. I would change your line 'Go away, go away' to Go, go away'. Then you've got a nice constantly declining beat on those first five lines.
Looking forward to seeing the finished song!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is really nice and it's got such a simple truth to it. I can tell this will be excellent!

-Arriam


Posted 5 Years Ago


I actually really love this cause it's just like me, people always seem to think I'm so weird just acting for attention or something, very good

Posted 5 Years Ago



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limoncello
limoncello

New York, NY



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HELLO! Just an itty-bitty writer and artist from a not-so-itty-bitty city. I write most of my poetry while dissociating, and I don't usually edit it after, so there usually some improvements tha.. more..

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