Blind faith

When Greed concedes to share

When Envy finds true love

Maybe on a wet Wednesday

As Hope feels charitable

Then will I rise to an occasional smile

But slowly. very slowly

In absolute awe

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

hard to have blind faith in people these days, but wow...if it comes to what you speak of in this poem...i too will be in awe---hesitantly, but will get there.

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of things must happen for the foolish men to lose greed and envy. Would be a better world if we could. Nice flow of things left the reader with many things to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Sweetly succinct, this poem speaks to the wondrousness of a world bereft of the maladies of the empty human condition. When lacking in soul, we will never be whole. Love this!

[Corset]

If I get paid before this weekend, I am going to the tattoo parlor and I am goin to get a tattoo of a hummingbird, and the word "you", so I can take "you" with me where ever I go, and when its peanut butter jelly time and the stranger asks who did you get that tattoo for Honey? and I'll smile I'll say , it was for you baby, all for "you" ha!

[Donald Meikle]

I hope you don't get paid tattoos are chosen scars

[Corset]

ya think? some would think them works of art, especially the tattoo artist, poor tattoo artists, but did it make you smile? you do realize I was kidding don't you?