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As She Passes By

As She Passes By

A Poem by lindalou
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I catch a peek now and then, of her presence near As giggle escapes, a sweet melody

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She danced in time to music only she could hear
Her body swayed to the beat as she skipped across the air, 
in fact the truth be told, she was a delight to see
Though no one could catch a glimpse...no one except me

As she frolicked so free to the rhythm of Heaven
a giggle would escape her as a sweet melody
She moved and glided as if she didn't have a care,
she sang her songs of praise as she hovered in the air

I catch a peek now and then of her presence near
As she passes by I know it is her, that is clear
Though she does not stir the air and not a ripple she makes
I can see her beauty clearly by the pictures she paints

I only have to look above to know she is close to me,
Angels play the music that makes her dance so free

I sway to the beat of her silent laughter
singing in perfect rhythm to my heart
I feel her gentle breath and I can hear her whisper...

Someday Mommy, we will never be apart!

© 2010 lindalou


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Well... this has a touching ending...
being I just became a father today...
it has an extra feel to it for me...
and the way it has transformed on the page..
.seem you are expect a new born yourself...
by the way this reflects in the lines...
almost a continuation to the story...I just read over...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lindalou

6 Years Ago

Congratulation on your new little one. Again, thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Glen Yumang Manese

6 Years Ago

you're welcome...and thanks also...



Reviews

Well... this has a touching ending...
being I just became a father today...
it has an extra feel to it for me...
and the way it has transformed on the page..
.seem you are expect a new born yourself...
by the way this reflects in the lines...
almost a continuation to the story...I just read over...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lindalou

6 Years Ago

Congratulation on your new little one. Again, thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Glen Yumang Manese

6 Years Ago

you're welcome...and thanks also...

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Added on July 3, 2010
Last Updated on July 3, 2010
Tags: Spiritual, God, Heaven, Death, Life, Personal, Praise, Angels

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lindalou
lindalou

Tulsa, OK



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