Twirling Shadows

Twirling Shadows

A Poem by Linear
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old poem

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Twirling shadows of mist and time
colours abound inside my mind

Yellow, green and indigo blue
it seems im always thinking of you.

© 2010 Linear


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Short and sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very beautiful and positive poem. I like the flow and feel of the words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


This has beautiful imagery in such a short poem, and I don't think you could have described it better. Wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem was short, sweet, to the point and so true. Whenever someone thinks of someone they love, they feel like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


isnt that the way it goes when we are thinking of someone special. i lkie this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


XD I like this one, the way the images and emotions wrap around each other. It's simple but with great sentiment.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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short but sweet..how I like them :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


what a great short poem with such a great flow!
the rhyming is nicely done,
and its so beautiful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love it, such few little words can have such a beautiful romantic feel!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 23, 2010
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Linear

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