Twirling Shadows

old poem

Twirling shadows of mist and time
colours abound inside my mind

Yellow, green and indigo blue
it seems im always thinking of you.

Reviews

[InkSlinger]

I am beginning to think you write for Hallmark Cards.. okay, well maybe not, especially with all those clever little twists that you add to your work.. I like the flow, and the imagery.. short, sweet little play.

[Ladysue]

Oh this is gorgeous...beautifully written...made me smile...

[Gone]

Tidy little poem. With my love of rhyming couplets it's sure to be a winner with me :)

[Sunny Skye]

Short but cool. Very nice.

[Marie Harrison]

Nice! I love this poem.

[Esoteric Strand]

A very innocent, heart-warming poem. Like something that would accompany flowers on Valentine's Day. It reminds me a lot of Donovan song lyrics, probably the colours inside my mind part. No mellow yellow though, ;)

Regards,

Enzo

[Moflo]

Great format! I like the simpleness of it and the descriptions really make it a profound poem.

[OT]

nice rhyme scheme!! it flows well, nice four beat to it!!

[thundergod]

life filled with colors are always bright..........liked it

[MiidniightSoul]

Wonderful. Those four, short lines are very powerful, touching. Very beautifully written. Great poem.