Love Lies

Love Lies

A Poem by Linear
"

And why not

"
"Come to me"
thats what you always say
It's what I always do

"Come to me now"
you say
yours eyes sparkling
this time I wont!

"Come to me"
more urgent now
but I dont

"Come to me this instant"
angry eyes flash
a threat
yet I stay

"Please come to me"
softer now
her words turning into silk
still I remain

"O do please come I ache for you"
she pleads
and still I do not come

"This is not a game you know, why do you lie so still"
worry now sets deep within her breast
and still I lay not moving

"Are you Ill my love, please lift yourself"
no movement do I make
no breath escapes my lips
no quivver of finger tips

"Please my dearest one come to me"
at last she comes to me
as she leans over me
I spring
and kiss her lips

A lesson so sweet she may never need again
for if she wishes me to come
she must

Wish again

© 2011 Linear


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Very well written poem. It was kind of playful, yet a little serious at the same time. I liked the ending it was nice. Good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this playful write :)

Peace
Robin

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice ending. I like this poem, Good job!

-SkyeBlanco

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ahh..playing dead..works every time!... loved it..playful..

Posted 13 Years Ago


touching...........

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love the way you ended this poem. For a moment I thought the narrator of this poem had died. lol Great unique write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It feels a little controlling and devious. Of course, a time or two I played both parts myself. Excellent write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a playful game! Love it!!!! teasing between lovers...what's better?

Posted 13 Years Ago


haha!

Posted 13 Years Ago


The joy of love is a give-and-take rollercoaster...sometimes you give a little and get a lot...the next time...well, like any game it's fun to play, either way. Such a playful, amusing little reminder that all relationships needs a little 'perk-me-up' and a change of gameplan every now and then...why not?

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 10, 2011
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Linear
Linear

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