I never left you

I never left you

A Poem by Linear
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Kind of sad poem of a lost but never forgotten love

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Do you remember that day when you begged me to stay?
not that I was ever going to leave you
you were so insecure
I never left you.

I remember the very first time I layed eyes on you
your hair was long, and you tried to hide behind it
but your laugh was sweet
your smile lit up the room
I never left you.

We talked
then talked some more, all through so many nights
and our love blossomed
rose up higher than Angels
I never left you.

I remember when we played the violins together
and I was lost in your strings
I wonder if you ever were lost in mine?
from a B Flat to a C Sharp
I was never far from you
and I never left you

But now as I drink my coffee
stare at these bare walls
I wonder where you are tonight
in who's embrace
and do you perhaps ask him, with those same words

"Please dont ever leave me"

I never left you!

© 2011 Linear


Author's Note

Linear
This was done on the spur, during the day i thought of a poem, but as usual it slipped away, so i wrote this instead

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Wow! I'm sitting here and am lost for words. Like what would my family think????
Duh! This was so powerful. You have a different way of writing. One I haven't seen before.. I like it! You write with soul, heart, and my Lord, such beautiful music deep with you... I am in awe..

Mags xx


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I often sit and ponder where previous lovers are today, then i have to bring my thoughts away.. because hurt over takes.. :( Great piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wonderful poem, my friend. Keep writing! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is still a wounderful poem. It has a lot of truth to the way so many people are in the world and it's quite easy to relate to.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sad and touching this is really really great wonderful write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i feel the same way about a guy and just that brings me into tears

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a really insigthfull piece of work,
a great job
you should have a spur more often!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poignant and bittersweet. I really felt this. I could hear the Violins, and the shared love of the couple playing them together.
Beautiful writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a mature view of love and loss and even betrayal it reads like. Stunning work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This cuts to bone. I love the way you've worded it. feels honest as a punch in the mouth by poem's end. a new favorite.

Cheers!
R.G.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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