I never left you

Kind of sad poem of a lost but never forgotten love

Do you remember that day when you begged me to stay?
not that I was ever going to leave you
you were so insecure
I never left you.

I remember the very first time I layed eyes on you
your hair was long, and you tried to hide behind it
but your laugh was sweet
your smile lit up the room
I never left you.

We talked
then talked some more, all through so many nights
and our love blossomed
rose up higher than Angels
I never left you.

I remember when we played the violins together
and I was lost in your strings
I wonder if you ever were lost in mine?
from a B Flat to a C Sharp
I was never far from you
and I never left you

But now as I drink my coffee
stare at these bare walls
I wonder where you are tonight
in who's embrace
and do you perhaps ask him, with those same words

"Please dont ever leave me"

I never left you!

Author's Note

This was done on the spur, during the day i thought of a poem, but as usual it slipped away, so i wrote this instead

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Wow! I'm sitting here and am lost for words. Like what would my family think????
Duh! This was so powerful. You have a different way of writing. One I haven't seen before.. I like it! You write with soul, heart, and my Lord, such beautiful music deep with you... I am in awe..

Mags xx

[Alicia™]

Hmm, this is a rather interesting piece and I like it…

One thing that I found it lacked, however, was why the other person left. Perhaps she accused him of cheating? Was she too insecure?

[Liza]

So sweet - a tender read. When a lover reaches out and asks don't ever leave me; they really love you and the vulnerability shows the strength of their comittment to love you...some have too much pride to show this; they trusted that their love was in good hands here just by saying those words...

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is so lovely so tender. I do the same with something that comes into my head if i don't hurry and get it down.. still, with the one slipping away you wrote a beauty..It is so touching.. beautiful.

Chloe

[claudia1201]

sad..violin memories..

[Terra]

haunting.

[Sports Girl]

I really liked this one, It is a wonderfully done poem with a lot of sadness wrapped in it. I like your use of descriptions and the you showed the love for the person.

[An owl on the moon]

You truly create the world of these two... their connections and life shared... and the strength to stay. What a sadness swept over me in the final edge of the poetic expression.

[Chris38]

This touched me deeply and I felt privileged to read it.

[Lilly]

A bittersweet write...

So well written here - conveyed the situation and feelings perfectly