I never left you

Kind of sad poem of a lost but never forgotten love

Do you remember that day when you begged me to stay?
not that I was ever going to leave you
you were so insecure
I never left you.

I remember the very first time I layed eyes on you
your hair was long, and you tried to hide behind it
but your laugh was sweet
your smile lit up the room
I never left you.

We talked
then talked some more, all through so many nights
and our love blossomed
rose up higher than Angels
I never left you.

I remember when we played the violins together
and I was lost in your strings
I wonder if you ever were lost in mine?
from a B Flat to a C Sharp
I was never far from you
and I never left you

But now as I drink my coffee
stare at these bare walls
I wonder where you are tonight
in who's embrace
and do you perhaps ask him, with those same words

"Please dont ever leave me"

I never left you!

Author's Note

This was done on the spur, during the day i thought of a poem, but as usual it slipped away, so i wrote this instead

Reviews

[Magdelena]

Wow! I'm sitting here and am lost for words. Like what would my family think????
Duh! This was so powerful. You have a different way of writing. One I haven't seen before.. I like it! You write with soul, heart, and my Lord, such beautiful music deep with you... I am in awe..

Mags xx

[Sunny Skye]

I like it very good. Good Job.

-SkyeBlanco-

[Isha Ethera]

nice writing. crazy how things work... i like how you get that feel here. .

[Poetic Beauty]

Isn't it funny that she asked you never to leave and then she is the one who walks out the door. the flow is easy to follow and I can truly feel the pain and questioning in the narrators mind. Love can be oh so sweet and then it can turn out to be lip puckering sour.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was so beautifully written, with longing and sadness ringing out!

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LOl readers notes..that happens to me..put it in notes on my phone! This though is great, the idea is so well executed, controlled, you gave enough you build a scene and create the characters..and then a clever twist of an ending...delightful

[Cynthia]

Oh, how sad and it really touches my heart when I read it! The ending is so good, and the feeling of it seems to rush in my heart when I read or finish this poem! Nice Job!

[Emily Jellybean :)]

Do you know what they say? When someone misses you, you end up missing them too..

To be in love is to be obsessed. To be obsessed is to never forget. To never forget is to always love. To always love is to be in love. :)

[Ladysue]

Oh those bittersweet memories...This was filled with fluid emotion...Sad, though quite beautiful...wonderfully done...

[xjust-for-me.x]

sometimes the best writes are just a spur of a moments thought and they blossum into what we write down on paper, and they always seem to be the best writes.

[InkSlinger]

Sometimes the best work flashes before us in an instances... you can't deny it, it rolls around inside mouth, slipping off the lips.. this is one of these times.. always a pleasure to read your work my friend.