Sleepy Time Dreams

Sleepy Time Dreams

A Poem by Linear
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A Quick and short poem

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In lightening silver streak
Tossed and lost
Inside a tempest deep

There forever my soul to keep
If I could only
Stay asleep

To see your face
And have some peace

© 2011 Linear


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hmm well I do like it but it is not up to your usual standards hun.....sorry but you did say to be honest when I read your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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this is like a mantra of absent lovers before bedding down for the night..lovely expression.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I loved the haunting quality to this work. My only question/criticism would be the choice of font colour. It just seems a little bold and over-bearing for the tender thoughts expressed, IMHO.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing write, I enjoyed this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the painting,the poem kinda makes me nostalgic for there are times I sleep so peacefully I never want to wake up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful words and a old painting. Always a outstanding combination. Thank you for your excellent poetry and gifts of artwork.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is short but filled with deep emotions that go beyond simple love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, to the point yet deep. A really liked this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wow, who knew such a short poem can convey such stong feelings. It felt so dreamy and hopefull. Love it, for sure!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was beautiful and strong, you did a great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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