The Fall of Giants

The Fall of Giants

A Poem by Linear
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not much

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In tender moments
of swirling rainbows heat
butterfly wings and all such foolish things

Tempt the heart
to transgress, pass over the border
to the sly temptress

Now inside the chamber beat
in rage
and temper to outreach

A maiden soft and so demure
to cast a spell
at this my door!

To laugh is my want
but to fall is my disgrace
you know my heart cant win this race.

© 2011 Linear


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I woke up to this well-crafted piece with vivid descriptions and wonderful expressions. The Fall Of Giants.

A maiden soft and so demure
to cast a spell
at this my door!

These lines have a lot of meaning lurking in them. The flow of this piece also caught my eye. Nicely done.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love this very much. The description, the picture, and general organization of words was just wonderful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lyrical fluidity~

Posted 7 Years Ago


A grammatical error, *cant* should be can't unless you mean to lean to one side as in list. That aside, I love the imagery here. I can certainly see flutterbies stirring the rainbow heat. It has a morose side yet still, somehow, uplifting as well. Very Nice...!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This was a wonderful, well written piece. Vivid descriptions

Sometimes I think the race is rigged, lol

Just beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the photo and the amazing words. The poem is needed to be read a few times. Flow of word and hidden stories allowed the reader to ponder many things. I like the combination of thoughts leading to a very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
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Posted 7 Years Ago


I woke up to this well-crafted piece with vivid descriptions and wonderful expressions. The Fall Of Giants.

A maiden soft and so demure
to cast a spell
at this my door!

These lines have a lot of meaning lurking in them. The flow of this piece also caught my eye. Nicely done.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A magnificent piece that was well penned! I read this a couple of times so i could savor each stanza! A perfect delight to read!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Linear

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