Painfull Game

Painfull Game

A Poem by Jane Korunoski
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How I think I will feel in my distant future

"

My eyes  through tears hide a burning pain

Thirsty beasts drink the life from my soul.

I'm alive, but still my blood is cold,

They won't last  long, the lies that i sold.

It's okay, everything will be fine,

But don't expect  it to be forgotten.

Hell frozen rain falls  down,

I see fallen king with  rusty crown.

An old man in pain, old pages  turns,

A pale memory, for a happy dad burns.

Blinded by the sorrow, he  barely speaks

Listen to his heart, is he still alive?

I see a portrait without face,

Hanging on the wall with sighs of despair.

The mother is sad, she cries for the child,

Unknowing what to do she goes wild.

There are clowns laughing at my face,

Throwing my soul in  some infinite space.

They're  playing some song,

I can't hear it.

I was once an angel, 

But I will still stay strong.  

 

© 2012 Jane Korunoski


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A powerful poem. Each line adding to the story and allowing the reader to know the pain and the situation in this poem. I like many of the statements in the poem.
"There are clowns laughing at my face,
Throwing my soul in some infinite space."
A positive ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I see myself in these very moving lines of yours :

I see ... An old man in pain, old pages turns,
A pale memory, for a happy dad burns.
Blinded by the sorrow, he barely speaks
Listen to his heart, is he still alive?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Releasing the pain by any means necessary is sometimes the right thing to do. We can't let it consume us from the inside.
Good poem, dark and sad. I enjoyed it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The suspense builds til the end....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Can't understand what happened that made life like this from the poem, but maybe its meant to be like this?

Its good, nice statements.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Swing round again. Bounce back.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your pain is bleeding all over the page. Stay strong, whatever happened, you need to talk about with someone you can trust. You shouldn't have to shoulder all this pain yourself.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can see the pain you are hiding inside you..............let it free from yourself...............your life is priceless and amazing, live it fullest and with fun. Laugh like anything and enjoy every moment....

I loved the sadness and the emotions in this poem , its expressive :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful poem. Each line adding to the story and allowing the reader to know the pain and the situation in this poem. I like many of the statements in the poem.
"There are clowns laughing at my face,
Throwing my soul in some infinite space."
A positive ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yesterday is done. Today is ]the process of change, as you show in this heartfelt prose. The last line says it all. Stay strong in spirit ~ Jude :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good write. We always seem to be fearful of the unknown. I wonder why. So much could be positive and great. And why clowns? People fear clowns yet they are supposed to make us laugh.........

There are some really good lines here. Keep it up!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jane Korunoski
Jane Korunoski

Prilep, Prilep, Macedonia



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I am 19 years old amateur writer from Macedonia- Europe. I started writing when i was 14 years old but i didn't get it that seriously. Now writing is my passion. I love to write about life, pain, .. more..

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