Let Me Add A 'Lil Fuel To Your Fire Baby

pyro moment >:-)

The flames that are your hands

Lick at my skin so deliciously 

The warmth of your hot skin searing 

Right 

Through 

Mine 

Is maddening. 

 Let me be your fuel

The ether that is my skin 

Will burst you into my own fire 

As our mouths collide 

The arsenic in my lips 

And the fire on your tongue 

Will bring the city to ruins 

In our own 

Personal 

E X P L O S I O N 

Let me be your accelerant 

The acetone on my fingertips 

Will light a fiery trail 

Right down your body 

As I lightly trace my initials 

Into 

Your 

Skin 

We'll create our own little cocktail 

Of Gasoline 

& 

Kerosene 

And we'll bring the whole world 

To its knees 

And with our burning passion and desire... 

We will set the whole world on fire...

Author's Note

bad.. i know

Reviews

[J.M. Walker]

Wow, This is interesting, because of the many different interpretations it could have. I see meaning on multiple levels and with different purposes. Fire, and fuel as a symbol of passion, and at the same time the literal connotation of fire and fuel is great. The end brings about thoughts of appocolypse. Or the end could mean the intentions that the sexual relationship will be the end of the world for others. I like it!

[Kaylor Mason]

Positively incendiary

[Rob Santana]

What an awesome write!!! Really like it. Very creative,gonna shelve this in my library.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. Filled with energy and life. I like the strong statements leading the reader to a very nice ending. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[zainul]

i need an extinguisher!

[Eagle Cruagh]

I am so sorry about your world, seeing it
all go up in smoke like that. You write beautifully
the subject, all that burning skin and hands dipped
in acetone and stuff probbably keeps life hot as
hell where you hang.
I have faith that you and your lover will survive,
it has been known to happen. You will both
probably live a long life and become filthy rich
from writing about your hot skin.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Sourav]

Very passionate and quite blazing. Good work.

[Kyle]

No, not bad. I like it. You are creative and obviously vivid in your descriptions. Nice.

[Kaylor Mason]

There's nothing more beautiful than the fires of seduction. This is nice work . . . some flames should never be doused