I Am

I Am

A Poem by ♥ Courtney ♥

 if i knew who i was

id tell you

but honestly 

theres not much to say

i talk too much 

i laugh too loud 

i cry too often

i act too proud

i b***h too much

i whine always

i smile too big

i stay angry for days

i slack in school

i dont study, i cram

if you dont like it, get over it

it's just the way I am...

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 ♥ Courtney ♥


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...Yes, you are Courtney... and how very honest you appear here, something so very often missed in these days of style, style, style. Thank you for writing such an open piece.
Rosa -x-

Posted 10 Years Ago


Once a man was asked to define himself,

his reply,

I am



Nice job

Posted 10 Years Ago



... ^_^ ...


Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice and lovely... :) I don't know what else to say.. I'm not much of a reviewer... so I'd just say I loved it! :D
-Signet

Posted 12 Years Ago


The last line reminds me of a song that said 'its just the way i am". Succinct and honest, and there's zero rhyme in the poem (which probably makes me more biased!)

Posted 12 Years Ago


sincere and tender, this poem is soft and yet very relatable, great work!

-Will

Posted 12 Years Ago


You sound so totally human! Nothing wrong with that.. love the sincerity in your lines.

Well scribed.






Posted 12 Years Ago


nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved the honest, flowing feel of this write. Your desire to be accepted for who you are. Excellent.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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♥ Courtney ♥
♥ Courtney ♥

Raccoon City , CA



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Hey I'm Courtney Its about time I changed this darn thing. Ive had the same Bio forever. You know I've never understood why we put these things up, they never depict the person they're supposed to .. more..

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