Obscured

Obscured

A Poem by Juliet Ray
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He will lead me. <3

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A decision she’s forced to make

A step forward she’s urged to take

Should she stay?  Or should she go?

All she wants is a “Yes” or “No”

 

Is there something out there for me?

Is there something I’m really meant to be?

Something has obscured my view

Will you be there when I need you?

 

Lead me through my darkest hour.

Provide me with the utmost power.

When I choose which path to take

Remind me that I do it for your sake.

© 2011 Juliet Ray


Author's Note

Juliet Ray
Just wrote this one pretty quickly. Let me know what you think. Also if you think there would be a better title. :)

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A beautiful poem that shows the courage too! Beautifully sentimental and well written love! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Juliet Ray
Juliet Ray

Saskatchewan, Canada



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