Really Fake

Really Fake

A Poem by Medium Dave
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eternally transient

"
so smart it's dumb
so well read
    where it started. . . it can't remember
    where it started. . . it does not matter

it's made for rocks
amongst the clouds

it's made for people
grouped alone together

and so blind it's clear
that to this thing. . .
all is born to live
        lives to die
        dies to change
and change is birth

because birth is change

but death is fake
and fake is real

(so begins an end)

© 2019 Medium Dave


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Interesting piece here, more food for thought. Almost like a riddle. Oddly cryptic but also understandable. At least to me.
My question then is, if fake is real, is real fake? Making the very fabric of reality consequently, false. Are we then standing on ground? Breathing air? Residing on a spherical mass of mineral and liquid spinning in circles in an endless expanse of continual nothingness....Are we alive?
If each end opens a new beginning is it really an end? Are we the beginning or, somewhere in the middle. If we are, not THE beginning, but A beginning, what did we end?
Nice write, I enjoyed it. However it is a bit early, so if none of this makes sense we'll blame residual sleep and call it a day.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyanth

5 Months Ago

Shall we set out to change the world's perception?
Medium Dave

5 Months Ago

That would probably be a very fruitful exercise. Dare I say, maybe even an objectively "good" thing.. read more
Lyanth

5 Months Ago

Indeed it would. :)



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DAH
Fake is a fabulous adjective to use anytime anywhere,
as it gathers attention and response.

And then there's this bit of dreamy expression:
"it's made for rocks
amongst the clouds"

This poem is filled with the wonder of thoughts and questions.

Bravo!
DAH

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another poem with some interesting questions.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting piece here, more food for thought. Almost like a riddle. Oddly cryptic but also understandable. At least to me.
My question then is, if fake is real, is real fake? Making the very fabric of reality consequently, false. Are we then standing on ground? Breathing air? Residing on a spherical mass of mineral and liquid spinning in circles in an endless expanse of continual nothingness....Are we alive?
If each end opens a new beginning is it really an end? Are we the beginning or, somewhere in the middle. If we are, not THE beginning, but A beginning, what did we end?
Nice write, I enjoyed it. However it is a bit early, so if none of this makes sense we'll blame residual sleep and call it a day.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyanth

5 Months Ago

Shall we set out to change the world's perception?
Medium Dave

5 Months Ago

That would probably be a very fruitful exercise. Dare I say, maybe even an objectively "good" thing.. read more
Lyanth

5 Months Ago

Indeed it would. :)

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Added on August 13, 2019
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