Where We All Fall Down

At a place where space falls faster than light
Where escape is not a fate for your life

There's an end that never ends but begins

And so I say to you now before then. . .

"abandon all hope ye who enter here"

Author's Note

Reviews

[drew garner]

is it about black holes? If it is I find the Lovecraftian way that you use science as a spiritual abyss really engaging. I don't know if you write prose/stories ever but this feels like a prelude or an epilogue or at the very least it would be wonderful as an epitaph. I almost saw this on a headstone in my mind when I read it. I think that on some level I like your short poems because of there clarity but still think the way you use repetition of words inspiring. There is a real sense of rhythm to your writing that I think would work with long-form storytelling.

[Davidgeo]

It is about black holes. And in a way, a kind of a gravestone inscription for the ultimate fate of the known universe.

I am very slowly working on something of length. Whether I ever actually finish it is not certain. I don't always start writing things just to finish them, the process is more important than it's conclusion I think... much like the spirit of this poem "there's an end that never ends but begins"

Thanks for your review. You're way too kind.